After doing the group peer revision with my English class, I have rediscovered how "good" of a writer I am. I have Professor Aronson to thank for this! Honestly, if I were in another English class, the essay we have been working on wouldn't have been as effective as I made it to be. I'm proud of it. I worked on my essay the prior night, not for too long, and the majority of the feedback I got was positive. It's surprising how much I have improved as a writer. I don't want to sound like I'm bragging, I've just grown so much in my writing that I'm beginning to be more confident with my skills.
I also enjoyed peer revising! It was an opportunity to know how my Bayan members write as well. :) Although I hate writing more "wishes" than "kisses", know that it's sweet criticism! Feel free to allow me to read your papers, everyone!
By the way, this will probably be my only post that doesn't look to harmful to read. Thanks again!

I definitely agree with you about enjoying the peer revisions :) I got to know my group a little more. I also don't like writing more "wishes" than "kisses" but at least you are helping them out!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you talked about the peer review because it did help us a lot. Also this peer review has been helping me improve on my writing and on what ideas could I give my classmates so they could make better their essays. I did enjoyed doing the peer review.
ReplyDeleteNicole and Jessica: Yay! Then we're on the same page here with how we feel about peer revising :) Maybe I could even get the chance to read your papers!
ReplyDeleteWell after you destroyed my essay, (tonnnnsss of Wishes) it opened my eyes for the many different aspects that the paper needs and requires. So now that i have the ideas to better my paper, i can "massage" it together to create a bangin essay! Thank You for the edit :)
ReplyDeleteps another thanks for the grammatical error corrections ^^
Rion with an "O", you're very welcome! :) Those wishes really helped, so I hope you keep them in mind!
ReplyDeletevery happy i got to read your essay :)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm glad I had the chance to read yours too :)
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